I like that this marker actually appears to be located at the historical battle grounds or along the roadside. I would like to see maybe some captions or headings to organize the paragraph more clearly, but it was still very visually pleasing. although the colonists were forced to retreat and losses on both sides were heavy, this battle helped rally Patriots and was a learning experience for the Continental Army with little training.
I also like the setting of your marker, it gave very good amount of interesting information. You made it evident that this battle was significant due to the boost in moral and success of the rebels, despite losing the fort.
I appreciate the effort you put into making the marker look as realistic as possible. I would have liked to see a little more information describing the diplomatic parts of this battle, but the information presented was very helpful overall. The battle was significant because it illustrated the American bravery and gave them some practice in fighting.
I appreciate the realistic qualities of your marker, and the setting. I think maybe putting the name of the battle to title the marker might be helpful, and I would like to see how this battle affected the British, even though it was considered a win. This battle may have been a loss for the colonists, but it made a bigger dent in the British forces than it did in the colonists'.
I like how well the information tied together. I would like to see a little more background on the Siege of Boston as well as more details on the tactics used by both sides. The Americans used the landscape to their advantage, and definitely showed the bravery of American Patriots.
I liked the interesting format of the marker. I would have liked to have see maybe a bigger map, I can't really read the text. This battle showed the Americans the skills and the tools that would be required in order for the Patriots to win the war.
I like how realistic and artful your marker is. It is basically everything you need as it is; however, it is a bit basic. I would have liked to see a form of organization via separate titles to divide the information. For example, you could use a "background" paragraph, a "the battle" paragraph, a "significance" paragraph, and even a "fun facts" paragraph. Loved it!
I like that this marker actually appears to be located at the historical battle grounds or along the roadside. I would like to see maybe some captions or headings to organize the paragraph more clearly, but it was still very visually pleasing. although the colonists were forced to retreat and losses on both sides were heavy, this battle helped rally Patriots and was a learning experience for the Continental Army with little training.
ReplyDeleteI also like the setting of your marker, it gave very good amount of interesting information. You made it evident that this battle was significant due to the boost in moral and success of the rebels, despite losing the fort.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate the effort you put into making the marker look as realistic as possible. I would have liked to see a little more information describing the diplomatic parts of this battle, but the information presented was very helpful overall. The battle was significant because it illustrated the American bravery and gave them some practice in fighting.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate the realistic qualities of your marker, and the setting. I think maybe putting the name of the battle to title the marker might be helpful, and I would like to see how this battle affected the British, even though it was considered a win. This battle may have been a loss for the colonists, but it made a bigger dent in the British forces than it did in the colonists'.
ReplyDeleteI like how well the information tied together. I would like to see a little more background on the Siege of Boston as well as more details on the tactics used by both sides. The Americans used the landscape to their advantage, and definitely showed the bravery of American Patriots.
ReplyDeleteI liked the interesting format of the marker. I would have liked to have see maybe a bigger map, I can't really read the text. This battle showed the Americans the skills and the tools that would be required in order for the Patriots to win the war.
ReplyDeleteI like how realistic and artful your marker is. It is basically everything you need as it is; however, it is a bit basic. I would have liked to see a form of organization via separate titles to divide the information. For example, you could use a "background" paragraph, a "the battle" paragraph, a "significance" paragraph, and even a "fun facts" paragraph. Loved it!
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